帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误 谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误
had
a
unforgettable
experience
i
heard
some
one
walking
i
cried,
because
i
was
so
fearful.
when
i
can't
hear
the
walking
sound.....
i
stop
crying
and
started
to
watch
tv......
i
was
more
frightened
than
before....
my
parents
didn't
back
home
until
11pm
不知道你现在上几年级，先帮你这么改一下吧，你看看合理吗
语法错误好像没有。
但我可以指几点可以改的地方。
1.He
found
that
listening
is
more
difficult
.这句话，最好改成最高级，
He
found
that
listening
is
the
most
difficult.你本身句子并没有错误，但根据前后文，和其他2项做下比较，因为用最高级比较好点。
2He
couldn't
understand
every
word。还有这句话，
这话的意思是，他不懂任何一个词语。我想，你本身并不是想说这个意思吧。应该是，他听不清楚大多数的词吧
应该改成这样，He
couldn't
listen
very
clearly.意思是，他听不太清楚。
请帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误 谢谢~
that let me fall in love with travelling 改成 that made me fall in love with travelling
I can not only enjoy visiting many wonderful scenery 改成 I can not only enjoy visiting many wonderful sceneries.
Also I make so many new friends during the journey. 改成 Also I can make so many new friends during the journey. 这样时态上才较为统一。
However, travelling is wonderful, but the end of a journey always makes me sad. 改为 Travelling is wonderful, but the end of a journey always makes me sad. 即去掉However，因为它与but意思重复。
Every time when I say goodbye to the friends who travel with me, 改为 Every time when I say goodbye to the friends who travelled/have travelled with me, 时态不正确
I can’t stop to cry 改为 I can’t stop crying 意思是”禁不住落泪“
because we have so many good time together and I don’t want to be apart. 改为 because we have had so many good time together and we don’t want to be apart. 时态问题和人称问题。
travel around the world is my dream 改为 travelling around the world is my dream 主语从句
第一行：holle—>hello
第二行：I like play basketball and play computer games—>I like playing basketball and playing computer games, like 后面加动词ing形式是固定搭配，另外computer games前面的playing与前面的play重复，可以省略
第五行：In ten years,I think I will be a teacher, because I can help many people.
翻译过来是“十年后我想我会成为一个老师，因为我可以帮助很多人”因果有误，你想想你能帮助很多人是你将成为一个老师的原因还是结果呢？有两种改法：
(1)I think I will be a teacher, so that I can help many people（我将成为一个老师，这样我就能帮助很多人）
(2)I want to be a teacher, because they can help many people（我想成为一个老师，因为老师能帮助很多人）
第十行：My report end. Thanks —>主语单数，end 改为ends
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