一篇很简单的英语作文帮我看一下有没有语法错误 一篇英语作文。可以帮我看一下我有哪里语法错误或者表述不当吗
we talked about ghost stories near to our tents。（ghost
story 是鬼故事，应该将鬼故事， 所以用 talked about）
that’s UFO 不是 a UFO。
we looked upward。
said with a low voice
near us： next to us 更好一些
got out： came out
i'm afraid： i'm scared 是我很害怕的意思，不应用afraid
widely open 语法 形容词
应该用woke up，要用过去时态
总的来说，不错！ 加油！！
有个小问题，said lowly不是表示小声的说，要用said with a low voice
还有，应该用woke up，要用过去时态。
Last summer,I went on a camp to the mountains with my classmates.we were telling ghost stories next to our tents at around 7 o'clock in the evening.Suddenly,Wang Jingjing said,"Listen!I've heard something unusual!"We stopped to listen but heard nothing."That's a UFO!"Gong Ying shouted.We looked up.A big bright thing soon landed near us.Two aliens got out of the UFO."What should we do?"Huang Yaxi asked."I'm scared."Lan Chenxi said in a low voice.We all stood there with our eyes widely opened.Then we didn't know what happened.We all fell asleep.When we woke up,we were at school.
This story is just my imagination.it'll be coincidence if the same thing happened before. thank you
希望我的纠正对你有帮助。你没有很多的语法错误，但是有几个词用的不是很恰当哦。 呵呵 ；）
A big bright thing
应该是Bright big， 一般性形容词放前，表物质大小之类的更加贴近名词中心词
把said lowly改成said with a low voice 现代式改woke up过去式
帮我看一下(很简单的事!)~
打字手误：places of interest ,Shanghai Oriental Pearl TV Tower,an amazing place
我觉得有更好的写法：It's in the southeast in China.---It lies in the southeastern China.
they awlays smile at you --常常微笑用be always doing的句型更能表现
I'm sure that you will love there.--避免和后面的love重复，用fall in love with it
另外，妙灵法仙写得也不错，只是有几个语法错误。我也稍作修改，嘿嘿。
Hello!Welcome to Shanghai.This is really a beautiful city,which lies in the southeastern China.The weather here is fine,and you can visit many places of interest.
As we all know, Shanghai Orental Pearl TV Tower is an amazing place.The tower is not only tall,but also nice.
The Bund is one of the symbols of Shanghai.And the best time to visit there is at night.I'm sure that you will fall in love with it.
People in Shanghai are friendly and helpful,they are awlays smiling at you .
In a word,Shanghai is a magic city,and I love Shanghai.
一段最后一句改成Now I'd like to tell you some which you might be intrested in.
二段中间We yong people去掉we，或改成the most yong people
倒数第三行去掉kind of
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