各位高手可以帮我看看我写的英语作文有没有语法错误?

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Hello,I am xxx(名字). I am a girl. I come from China . I am a student. I am in No.8 middle school , I am in class3 grade 7 . I like astronomy . I think it is very wonderful . My favorite color is blue . oh, that is fish. I like eating them. They are very delicious. I am going to play with xxx名字 tomorrow .
(I come from China 和 I am from China 都可以,但是不能写成 I am come from China
有几处错误已经帮你改好了,望采纳

不要直接说oh, that is fish.
说I like eating fish.就可以了
你可以放在Microsoft Office Word里查一下拼写、语法
我没发现问题

你好,修改如下:Hello,I am xxx(名字). I am a girl. I come from China . I am a student studying in No.8 middle school , and I am in Class3,Grade 7 . I like astronomy . I think it is very wonderful . My favorite color is blue . oh, they are fishes. I like eating them. They're very delicious. I am going to play with xxx名字 tomorrow .满意速速采纳,谢谢合作!

第三句。改成 I come from China。 第五句 class 和 grade 首字母大写 倒数第三句 them 改成it。 没了

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帮我看看我写的英语作文里有没有语法错误~

I think(believe) I am the best in the world.Li Bai has(delete) said:there must be a natural
material I use.So i find(found) my advantages hardly.I found that I am good at singing , When I am(was) free ,I often listen to music and sing . I do well in writing as well . I think(feel) Chinese is insteresting . I enjoy reading The Book Of Songs.I think I (still) have a lot of advantages I haven't (yet)found. So I will continue to find my advantages.

It's a popular situation that the children's schoolbags are getting heavier,which leads more and more students to be weary of studying.what's the reason why this situation appers?
As far as I know ,firstly,parents expect their children to be useful people.secondly,teachers focus on the scores because it is a measurement of performance.Therefore,it is natural for teachers to assign more homework.
In my opinion,it is the most thing that eases the children's academic burden.
本来在WORD上都用红色标出来了,但在这却成了黑色,没办法,只能你自己对着找了。我发现的问题目前就这么多,希望会对你有所帮助。PS:appear是不及物动词后面不能直接加名词,英语的表达不能像汉语,你可以多看一些英语时文,加强语感。

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