帮我看看我这篇英语作文有什么错误么 谢谢 请您帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错误，谢谢。

找出几个问题

Remembering the university entrance exam,感觉生硬

尝试改为 i remember that in the university entrance exam,

For example,physical,chemistry and politics

表示物理学 用 physics或者physical sciences; for example后面接名词通常只有一个名词，一般都是句子;

But when I sometimes 别扭,改成 but sometimes when I;

I have forgotten so much what 改成

i have forgotten so much of what；

So I think that the period of the university entrance exam,my cultural level is peak all my life.

在高考时期，我的文化水平达到了一生中最顶端

So i think that i was at the peak of my cultural level in my life when i attended the university entrance exam

帮我看看这篇英语作文有什么错误~

建议改成：
I went to the playground and played basketball this morning.I went there early.I was the only one in the playground.Later,a boy came.first,I saw he was not tall.I thought he still study in a primary school.But at last,I felt he was headsome.I thought he was a grace boy.He sometimes picked up the ball for me.I was a little interested in him.
还有，你的文章有矛盾，太中文化了。

目测没有，我觉得在lily后面加一个准确的日期比较好，这是我的建议，祝楼主天天向上，学业进步(´•ω•`๑)

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