1.请帮我改改错句。或者完善整篇文章 2.帮我把括号里面的内容加点连词 急用 麻烦各位英语高手帮帮忙
(I am a sincere and reliable person with nice personality. I am willing to learn and make（动词原形就行） progress, and I can work under high pressure
I have a strong faith to accomplish my work.
My words: just do it.)
I will be appreciated for this opportunity if you could offer me.（主句用将来时态） Thank you for your time.
（哪不懂，在线交谈吧） （楼上的，我觉得句型复杂点挺好。）
It is my honor to be here today. I would make a brief introduction of myself. My name is XXX. I’m 22 years old. I was born in sz and I graduated from Institute of Technology College in zhuhai. My major is information system and information management.
I have been working in taiping insurance company in zhuhai in Assistant Manager position for 2 month. My job duty is mainly about personal recruitment. After that, I have been working in a fitness club in sales position for 4 months. My job duty is sale the fitness card.
(I am a sincere and reliable person with nice personality. I am willing to learn and making progress, and I can work under high pressure. I have a strong faith to accomplish my work.
My words: just do it.)
I m appreciated for this opportunity if you could offer me. Thank you for your time.
改过的给您大写了，这个是演说稿还是写的？写的话请注意大小写，说的话记得别加太多绕口的词,不要太多从句，简单句型最佳，两个都要突出重点，例如你的职位要先提，公司名字后提，
It is my honor to be here today. I would LIKE TO make a brief introduction of myself. My name is XXX. I’m 22 years old. I was born in sz and I graduated from Institute of Technology College in zhuhai. My major is information system and information management.
I have been working AS AN ASSISTANT MANAGER in taiping insurance company in zhuhai for 2 monthS. My MAIN duty is personal recruitment. After that, I WORKED in a fitness club in sales position for 4 months. My job duty WAS SELLING the fitness card.
I am a sincere and reliable person with nice personality. I am willing to learn and making progress, and I can work under high pressure. I have a strong faith to accomplish my work.
My personal motto is: just do it.
I APPRECIATE YOU OFFERING ME THIS OPPORTUNITY. Thank you for your time.
英语.连词成句与作文~
Some years later I'll badly became the woman.
Children in Britain go to school from Monday to Friday.
Dear Peter:
I am so glad that you will come to my school for a day's study exchange activity. I email you to tell you the schedule of that day. In the morning, you will visit our campus first, then experience our class atmosphere. After lunch, we will have some fun, such as play games.
Hope to see you soon!
Yours
LiMing
我认认真真写的哦，采纳我的吧。。嘿嘿
1、regretful改成regretable
2、第二个，直接用has
3、as--改成which，抱歉，第一次没看清楚，这个是定语从句，which引导
4、the more----直接用 more，比较级不加定冠词的
5、remind-----改成remingding ，这个用以修饰letter的
6、was--改成 had
7、with，我个人觉得这个是正确的，因为签合同的英文表达就是sign the contract with someone，我不知道怎么改介个。。。
8、quite beyond --改成rather than
9、put--改成stated，陈述，讲明
OK,最后希望能帮到Mit 你拉，多多指导，共同进步，咔咔
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