检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误
我认为更好的说法是The film is called<brother bear>
这里就不用过去式了 因为他一直都叫<brother bear>
A man had changed into a bear 时态错误
不用过去完成时 用 一般过去式
A man changed into a bear
However, He hated bears. Then he lived with a
little bear 这两句话似乎接不上号
他恨熊 为什么还和熊住在一起
干脆从前面就改过来
A man killed too many bears. so he changed into a
bear .and although he hated bears ,he had to
lived with a little bear 我没看过这个电影 我只觉
得这样改比较通 虽然语法上你的没错
They help each other 改为They helped each other
He never killed bears 改为 他不再杀熊了更好
He didn't kill bears any more
还有The story told us it is wrong to kill
the animals.
改成 The story tells us that we should
protect animals They are our friends
好些
第一行中间 the film's name is ... 最后 A man changed 去掉had
第二行because前面用逗号，b小写， he had killed 加had
第二行 however, he hated bears 都去掉 不知道你想说什么
第三行 helped 加-ed 最后的killed改成kills
第四行 bear after that. 去掉s 加入after that
第四行 kill animals 去掉the
The film is <brother bear>.
这句话中的<brother bear>.不用加括号吧？？
还有is应改为was
A man had changed into a bear. Because he killed too many bears.
我觉得两句合为一句更好。而且时态有点问题。个人认为应该成A man changed into a bear because he had killed too many bears.
They help each other.
help应改为helped
He never killed bears.
想表达什么意思？他决不杀熊？还是说他不再杀熊了？
那应该说成He didn't kill bears any more.
The story told us it is wrong to kill the animals.
宾语从句前后时态不对。
可将told改为tells或is改为was（个人认为前者更好）
kill the animals.改为kill animals更好
中间However, He hated bears. Then he lived with a little bear. They helped each other. 不知道你要表达什么意思……但是句子衔接不太好……不过也应该么问题……
结尾可加：
What do you think about the film？Do you agree with me？
The first line: had should be cut off.
third:help should be changed to helped
fourth： the second "the"is unnecessary
我把整段重新打了一遍...
Yesterday I went to see a movie, Brother Bear, with my friend. A man had changed into a bear because he killed too many bears. He hated bears. Then, he lived with a little bear and they helped each other. In the end, he changed back into a man and never killed bears again. The story tells us that it is wrong to kill animals. They are our friends.
Brother Bear 因为是个电影名，要么用斜体，要么要用底线。
检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误~
One time when you recall your memories- the life is unpredictable like weather. Sometime it's good and sometime it's bad, just like when you are young you are innocent and pure untill you grow up. You become a mean person. maybe it's the herald maybe it's The rain come suddenly that haven't any herald. Yesterday the sky looked lovely. When I am still a little girl. I believe everything. All the things that adults say I believe. I believe all the things that world tell me untill I have grown up. The pressure come from pople around me. The Bad behavior come from the news. The sad feeling come from somebody who hate me. At the time when I recalled all above things come to me. I curse someone who make me unhappy like the queen from the story of Snow White. Am I an evil like the sister from Cinderella ? Am I so mean like the witch from Mermaid? I stop till something good happened to me or punishment come to me one day or I become strong and save myself. All thing hardly changes in a good way .At a time when you think all bad thing come to you, maybe you will become a mean person but if you are strong enough to face all bad thing, you will become a kind person again like the weather after rainy day. it's sunny.
这篇文章我坚持读完了 大概懂意思了（思想挺深邃的）， 不过已经不能用“检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误”来形容了
我想你还是把汉语打上来，让大家翻译一下比较贴切一些
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