帮我修改一下英语作文。尤其是纠正一下错的语法。急求。在线等。 帮我看一下，英语作文的语法点有木有错,在线等
1.soom 拼写错误 应为some；
2.拼写不规范，建议将speaked改为spoke；
【作文评析】
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误，尤其加强学术词汇的使用；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少。
【例文】
It was a bright, sunny day. I rode my bike to the park.I took some books outside and sat on the grass.While I was reading carefully, two kids beside me were talking loudly. They were so noisy that I can't read anymore."Please speak softly," I put down my books and speaked to them. But they just looked at me and laughed. I looked down.To my surprise, I found my books missing. Then these two kids ran to the Center Park. I followed them and I found my books were under a tree, near the lake. A monkey was playing with them.Then I quickly threw a stone to the monkey, and it ran away. I picked up my books and eventually got back home. What a terrible day!
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求采纳
O(∩_∩)O~
some 一些，你拼错了
帮忙修改一下英语作文。只要把语法错误和词汇错误纠正出来。~
Today I want to talk about something (which删去或用that，先行词是不定代词，关系代词用that) the Italians like to eat best, that is macaroni. Macaroni is （an删去，food是不可数名词，不可与a连用） Italian food and it is also very popular all round the world. The Italians like it（them 改为it）as much as（the same way删去） we like rice. In Italy, one （single删去） Italian eats 28 kilograms of macaroni every year.
Now experts have different ideas about the history of （the 删去）macaroni. Some believe that the great explorer, Marco polo had taken it（them改为it） from China to Italy. But more experts are sure that Etruscans, who at that time, had once been the residents of Northern Italy, had begun to make macaroni early in the 7th century. For large wooden tables which were surely used to mix flour and cookers that were considered as cooking macaronis were found in the Etruscan ruins. Those are the best evidence to prove the inventors of the macaroni were Italians.
Today, people always cook （the删去 ）macaroni with ketchup, cheese, pepper, mushrooms, etc. These prove（ the fact删去） that we have made a great （many删去） progress in cooking （the 删去）macaroni. Macaroni also has its large family. Zita, Ennie, Lasagne, Orzo Route, Capellini… Macaroni has reached over 500 kinds and we have already had 2000 ways to cook the food. We will never have the chance to taste most of them. So if you plan to have some macaroni for Today’s dinner, try to cook it in a different
1.Famil应该是Family吧。
2.I don't want to be fat 。我不想成为胖？应该是I don't want to 【get】 fat.我不想变胖。
3..My favorite two dish 【is 】？应该是【are】吧。
4.but I don't think it healthy应该是 but I don't think it 【is】healthy
5.正文中On new year应该是【On New Year's Eve 】
这个时态如果是过去式的话
have-had is-was don‘t-didn’t
我觉得现在这个时态应该也可以。
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