初二英语作文 急用 无语法错误 谢谢

October 1, 2009, is China's 60th birthday, I and my friends, go hiking. The wild, wild flowers blossoming, contests, and grass green, soft, warm sun, good comfort, and we play together, eat together, but also took many pictures, I'm so happy ah!
翻译：2009年10月1日，是我国的60华诞，我和我的好朋友，一起去郊游。野外，野花朵朵，争奇斗艳，草地绿油油的，软软的，太阳暖暖的，好舒服，我们一起玩耍，一起用餐，还拍了好多照片，我好高兴啊！

绝对原创的，没有语法错误是肯定的。

October 1st was the National Day. It was Thursday. The sun was shining. My friends and I decided to go to the park together. On our way there, we saw a lot of people. All of them looked very happy. We also saw many beautiful tall buildings. We got to the park at noon and had our lunch first. After that, we walked around the park and chatted to each other,enjoying the relaxation.We talked about the rapid development of our country. At the same time, we took a lot of photos in the park. We had a nice day.

我自己写的，没有语法错误，希望对你有帮助。

October 1st was the National Day. It was Thursday. The sun was shining. My friends and I decided to go to the park together. On our way there, we saw a lot of people. All of them looked very happy. We also saw many beautiful tall buildings. We got to the park at noon and had our lunch first. After that, we walked around the park and chatted to each other,enjoying the relaxation.We talked about the rapid development of our country. At the same time, we took a lot of photos in the park. We had a nice day.

你用中文写一段话。帮你翻成英文比较方便。

初二英语作文 急用 无语法错误 谢谢~

An,
I want to tell you something about my life in school.I think I`m in trouble here.First I have no friend,there are no one will accept me.Although I don`t worry about it ,I don`t feel good in diet,it isn`t suitable with me.The worst thing that I can`t stand is that I couldn`t keep my foot on stady,I think I`m a slow student in our class,I want to change it,but it is no use.What should I do?
yours
Mam

On Labour Day，Xiao Hong and her mother went to Nanjing Streetstreet.On the street，there were many people.Some were walking around, others were taking phtos.On two sides of the street，there were beautiful flowers.But there were no buses or cars on the street. At that timeXiao Hong see a girl crying near the stop gate.So they asked the girl why she was crying.The girl tell them that she was lost.And then，Xiao Hong and her mother took the girl to her home. The girl's family thanked them. Xiao Hong and her mother were very happy.
I think It’s very kind of Xiao Hong and her mother！I love them.