帮我看看我写的这篇英语作文有没有错的句子。
第三句，talk to each other and share something with each other. 这样会比较正确。然后，those are 可以换成 which is good to our friendship that helps us/ so that to know each other better.
最后一句，开头不可以用If we do this, 因为车辆变少跟自己照顾自己没有关系。应该加also。Also, if we did this,the cars on the street will get fewer and fewer, and the city will no longer be crowded.
share something with each other更好一点，还有so that we will know each other better,你缺少了主语，这里主语不能省略。
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谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误，谢谢，有错帮忙说下正确句子。感谢！~
Dear Zhang Jing:
Hello!
I know tomorrow is your birthday .I hope you will have a wonderful birthday .
(Since tomorrow is your birthday ,I hope you will have a wonderful day.)
(But去掉） I’m so sorry I can’t come （go）to your birthday party .Because（，because）I’m very busy (in )these days.
In the morning , I usually get up (very early , ）at about 8 o’clock .I have to go to the Children’s Palace to learn physics at 8:40 . The lessons begin at 9’00 . After the class , it ‘s 10’40 . Then I should go home and spend half an hour on my homework .In the afternoon ,I have to clean my house and do much housework .That always makes me feel so tired .And I can watch TV for one hour . At 4:00p.m. ,I always go to my neighbour’s house to look after their child , Liu Yulin .He is only 3 years old . He is very naughty ,so it’s vvery hard to look after him.
At night , I can play computer and watch TV , but it’s only for 2 hours .And I also have to go to bed early , at about 10:30.
My vacation is too busy ,so I don’t have any time to come to your birthday party ,sorry . (But）Yet I still havea gift for you .What’s that? OK , I will let your friend Xue Ting （to去掉） take it to you.
At last , （I also say “） Happy birthday to you!（”）.
Yours ,
Wendy
大致改了，有的直接改，没括出来
建议，so also then but very have to没必要用那么多
不要那么多逗号，把句子连起来，说话简洁点
LZ年纪应该不大，写成这样不错了
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