请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“1. 和朋友一起读Mark Chapter 1，非。。。” 请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“Dear Profes...
1. 和朋友一起读Mark Chapter 1，非常的愉快；
2. 自己给自己买月饼，却发现中秋节才过了一天，各大华人超市的月饼都已经卖完了；
3. 昨晚虽然睡得很早，但是竟然4点就醒了。导致一整天都很没有精神。
我的翻译：
1. I spent a good time when I was reading and decision Book Mark Chapter one with my friend;
I had a good time to read and disucss the book, Mark Chapter one, with my friend.
（spend time表示花费时间，而非过得愉快；disision是名词。have a good time to do sth 做某事很愉快）
2. I 【wanted to buy】 a moon cakes 【for】myself but I was surprised that almost all Chinese market 【had sold out of】 the moon cakes just one day after 【the Mid-autumn Festival】.
3. I slept early last night, but wake up at 4 am and 【couldn't】 sleep any more, 【which】 made me feel sleepy all the day. 一句话中，无连接词时，不能出现两个独立句子。
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1 I had a good time when I read and discussed Book Mark Chapter one with my friend;
2 I planned to buy a mooncake myself, but I was surprised that almost all Chinese market sold out the mooncake just one day after Mid-Autumn Day.
3 I went to bed early last night but woke up at 4 am and couldn't sleep any more, which makes me feel sleepy all day long.
已对语法时态，以及不地道的用法作出纠正，望采纳~
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1 I spent a good time in reading Mark Chapter 1 with my friend.
2 sell 改成 sold
3 wake 改成 woke this 改成which
1. It is an enjoyment to read Mark Chapter 1 with friends.
2. When I was going to buy some mooncake for myself, I was surprised to find that almost all the Chinese shops had sold out the mooncake just one day after the Mid-Moon Festival.
3. Though I slept very early yesterday, I woke up at 4 in the morning, which makes me sleepy all the day.
请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误（这是对我非常重要的特殊情况说明）~
Now, all the exams about 'networking essentials' have been completed, after my calculation，my final score would be 50.91%.
I think this is a quite danger
the minimum requirement
some mistakes when I do this calculation
I have very seriously taken all my subjects this semester
but to be honest，
I also realised that I had learning problems when I started my study
And furthermore , there some unfortunate thinngs happened in my family in this semester.
I then turned not only to special consider but also to special need for help.
meanwhile I also took antidepressant drug (nova)(药物名称) which has quite strong by-effect.
Also, I have applied with the special consider for the exam and got the permission with the support from the councilor.
Sincere thanks.
因时间关系，我大概看了一遍，没大动，只是更正了一些语法错误。希望有帮助。
如有疑问，可私信给我，我晚点覆你。
祝好运！
I Know i maybe bother you too much times about these kind things. I feel truly sorry about this.
改成
I feel truly sorry to bother you so many times about this.
最后写I will appreciate it very much.
语法上就是much times -->many times
appreciate-->appreciate it
其他只是我的建议，您可以随意。
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看了楼上的回复我发现这里也是要改的
But could you take some time recheck my exactly exam paper again, since i really can't believe I got a such low mark.
take some time to recheck
然后exactly是副词，不能修饰名词，所以去掉就可以了
然后,改成? 后面since的s改成大写
然后a such low mark改成such a low mark，这个也是语法问题
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