帮改一下作文 就看看有什么语法错误 急用

Hello everyone I spent this holiday at home. In the holiday, I went to the library and park, I also went shopping with my friends. I stayed at home most of the holiday, I played games , watched TV and helped my mother do housework. I did my homework, too. This is my holiday.

求帮忙改作文语法错误~

修改了，本来加了红色和斜体。但放在这里就显示不了。只好你自个对比了。
Nowadays, all kinds of disputes are happening around the world every day. That makes weapons become a hot topic. Are weapons metaphors of power? As far as I am concerned, weapons are metaphors of power. A weapon is a tool used in order to inflict damage or harm to living beings. Power is the ability or right to control people or events. Through the two definitions, it is very easy for us to find out that weapon is just the kind of thing we would need when we want to control people or events. Weapons are metaphors of power to both people and countries. From the narrow sense, a weapon such like a gun endows a policeman with the power to enforce the law. When chasing a criminal, weapons make it easier for the police to arrest the criminal and fulfill their duties. From the broad sense, weapons give a country the power to protect itself from the invaders and invasion from other countries.

到这幅画有一只母鸡和自豪的脸。也有句话在手说我保证蛋我躺看不到拐弯处,它必须有皮肤,白色和蛋黄。是显示,多数公司经常这样做,它已经影响了我们的社会认真。

很明显,我们就可以推断出形式的一种重要的这幅画不作任何功能的话告诉你应该做的是帮助你得到的经验,值得做的事。例如,当我们要课文,老师要求我们写了一篇关于在考试不要作弊。如果我是写论文,我就自己做的东西。然而,有很多我向他们介绍我们承诺的,很多事情我们应该做的事。

考虑到这些理由,为什么有些人坏习惯,他们有自己的其他部分的东西,我们应该认识到,几个要点:首先,我们做的很好,为我们做了;第二,没有必要说了很多钱给你需要做些什么。尽管所有这些因素。每个人都要做好他部分不待说了。